The main area of improvement which i saw in my feedback was that there should have been some more consistency between my front and back page with my double page spread instead of my single page article. Originally these pages were going to be based off my double page spread however i decided at the last minute intentionally that i wanted to avoid there being too much coverage of the one specific game which i chose to write about in my double page article. Furthermore i feel that the game i chose to put on my front and back page had far more interesting and pleasing graphics than the game in my double page spread which was relatively mundane and boring.

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One of my responses said that my front and back pages were "pretty good" to try and improve these to make them better than that i decided to add more information onto my front page and change the background to see if it was something i preferred. In the end i feel this worked better as it ended up going into my final magazine instead of the draft.

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Additionally another piece of feedback i received was regarding my articles and content and whether it was easy to find/follow. The response was that it was "quite easy" i wanted to change this to reflect more positively so i decided to create a new contents page to try and make the content easier to find and also provide more detail as to what was on each page. In my opinion this made a drastic improvement to the magazine as a whole.